Hi there, Could you please edit the work I have already written by following the tutor’s comments at the side. Once that’s done could you carry on writing my dissertation following the brief below. Also could you please structure the dissertation so it links and makes sense and use the sources I have in my bibliography, thank you.

I I’m writing my dissertation for my final I will be looking, exploring and researching the Indian textile industry and how it evolved since the 18th and 19th century to present day. I will examine key effects on the industry in reviewing history of the British Empire rule in India and the growing process of globalization since then.

The research aims to uncover the history of Indian textiles, how this industry in India transformed and developed since the 18th century. I will examine how the different regions of India with their different outlooks and beliefs influenced this industry. I will then explore how Indian textiles influenced the world through their increased popularity in imperial times.

I will conclude with exploring how the patterns, colours, materials and methods have further changed due to globalization. The research will also explore how globalization is effecting the Indian textile industry today.

In Chapter one I will discuss the topic on the British Empire and how it affected the Indian textile industry, and how the different regions in India have different cultures and beliefs. History of british raj This is chapter 1 + history of Raj and british rule.

consider: Through this review India’s how India’s many states and different cultures and beliefs will be explored.

A note- you are suggesting a vast research, best if you say what regions are you focusing on, what times?

· In chapter two I will be looking at Indian textiles and how the imperial times had such a huge impact on the industry. I will then explore how Indian textiles influenced the world through their increased popularity in imperial times.

· What effects did their influence have?

· How the empire changed India?

· Ban of cotton

· In chapter three I will explore how the patterns, colours, materials and methods have further changed due to globalization. The research will also explore how globalization is effecting the Indian textile industry today.

· I will examine key effects on the industry in reviewing history of the British Empire rule in India and the growing process of globalization since then.

· Any meaning of the colours used?

· Names of materials?

· Have the effects changed the textile industry for the better or worse?

· The process of globalization since the 19th century

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Include books in the bibliography plus The Global textile industry

Toyne, Brian, Crill, R. (1998) Indian Ikat textiles, Textiles Today: A Global Survey of Trends and Tradition.

Online sources such as websites and journals.

Could you please write 5000 words to a 2:2 pass level. In addition can you amend the work I have uploaded so its correct, already has 3000 words that need amending and then add another 5000 to make it 8000 in total. thank you